As there are many proverbs related to health, such as 'The greatest wealth is Health.', health plays one of the most important parts in our lives, and keeping healthy lives has been a goal of life for many people. However, due to environmental factors and economical factors, many people cannot guard their own health. Reflecting this situation, the concept 'Global Health' emerged. Global Health, which means research and practice that places a priority on improving health and achieving equity in health for all people worldwide, has been the center talking point among nations and global organizations. However, as global health issues are spreaded extensively and need active cooperation of all nations, it is hard to solve. To solve this issue and guarantee health of all citizens, global leaders should take global health as their primary concern.
1. Attention grabber
I attracted the audience by describing a familiar proverb, and then linked it into the current situation that many people cannnot guard their health.
2. Explains the topic
I mentioned the background of the emergence of the term 'global health', and definition of it.
3. My thesis
It was clear and short. I changed it a little bit according to the context. 'Global leaders should take global health as their primary concern.
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