2014년 10월 26일 일요일

First Draft Completed


   As there are many proverbs related to health, such as 'The greatest wealth is Health.', health plays one of the most important parts in our lives, and keeping healthy lives has been a goal of life for many people. However, due to environmental factors and economical factors, many people cannot guard their own health. Reflecting this situation, the concept 'Global Health' emerged. Global Health, which means research and practice that places a priority on improving health and achieving equity in health for all people worldwide, has been the center talking point among nations and global organizations. However, as global health issues are spreaded extensively and need active cooperation of all nations, it is hard to solve. To solve this issue and guarantee health of all citizens, global leaders should take global health as their primary concern.
   As everyone knows, health problems are quite different between developing countries and developed countries. Also, health problems in developing countries are usually more serious than those in developed countries.
   Developing countries, which are nations with lower standard of living, are still suffering from the health problems that already disappeared in developed countries. About 14 million people die each year due to infectious diseases, and many of them are preventable or treatable, such as acute respiratory infections, diarrhoeal diseases, malaria and tuberculosis, taking 45% of deaths in Africa and South-East Asia. This health crisis is caused by several factors such as poverty, lack of access to health services, water and inaccessibility of effective medicine. For example, more than 95% of HIV infections are in developing countries, two-thirds of them in sub-Saharan Africa, where over 28 million people are living with HIV. AIDS medicine is estimated at US$10,000-15,000 (the Guardian, 12 February 2001). This price level puts such treatment out of reach of most people in the developing world. Malnutrition is also serious in developing countries while it almost disappeared in developed countries. The vast majority of the world's hungry people live in developing countries, where 13.5 percent of the population is undernourished. Asia is the continent with the most hungry people which takes two thirds of the total. Sub-Saharan Africa is the region with the highest percentage of hunger. One person in four there is undernourished. When malnutrition comes to children, the problem becomes more severe since it can directly lead to death. One out of six children, which is roughly 100million, in developing countries is underweight. While One in four of the world's children are stunted, the proportion can rise to one in three in developing countries.
   Many diseases are emerging in developed countries too. Ironically, as developing countries continue their efforts to reduce hunger, some in those countries are also facing the opposing problem of obesity. As Prakash Shetty, the chief of FAO's(Food and Agricultural Organization of United Nations) Nutrition Planning said "We believe obesity is a significant problem that needs to be dealt with, along with the problem of the underfed", Obesity is also a serious problem in developing countries along with malnutrition and other developing countries' health diseases. This result is due to dietary imbalance. While obesity rate in developed countries is turning a cornor (The rate of obesity in preschool-age children dropped about 40% over the past decade, according to data from a comprehensive federal survey published Tuesday in the Journal of the American Medical Association), obesity rate is drastically increasing in developing countries. For example, in China, the number of overweight people jumped from less than 10 percent to 15 percent in just three years. Brazil and Colombia, the figure hovers around 40 percent, a level comparable to a number of European countries. Sub-Saharan Africa, where has the highest number of hungry people, is showing an increase in obesity, especially among urban women.
   Solving developing countries' health problems and promoting global health are urgent issues and many efforts are needed. If not, health problems will keep bothering all disadvantaged people.
   Then, why should global health should be primary concern for future global leaders? Why should people in the United States of America, the United Kingdom, and Australia should also concern about global health that might seem unrelated to them although they will be the ones who should pay the most for it? Actually, for a number of critical reasons, the global health should be concerns for not only developing nations, but developed nations.
   First, everyone deserves an equal opportunity for health. Many member states of the United Nations signed on to Article 25, which says:
'Everyone has the right to a standard of living adequate for the health and well-being of himself and of his family, including food, clothing, housing and medical care and necessary social services, and the right to security in the event of unemployment, sickness, disability, widowhood, old age or other lack of livelihood in circumstances beyond his control.'
The world community has so many tools to make people healthy today, allowing them to contribute to their families and their communities. However, many children in poor countries get sick and die needlessly from malnutrition of from diseases that are curable and preventable. Many adults in developing countries are dying due to their lack of access to medicines that are available to people in rich countries. Is this just? Is it right to accept such deaths without steps to prevent them?
   Second, diseases do not respect boundaries. In other words, developing countries also can get diseases of developed countries. This is especially true for epidemic disease. Human immunodeficiency virus(HIV), has spread worldwide. A person with tuberculosis can infect 15 people a year. Actually, in the United States as a whole, 39% of all tuberculosis cases are in foreign-born individuals; in California, this proportion is 69%. Clearly, the health of each of us is increasingly depending on the health of others.
   Some economists might insist that promoting global health is not important. They can insist that solving other urgent issues such as economic recession is much more important and essential for enhancing the quality of life. That's partly true. It is also important to solve other urgent issues. However, promoting global health is much more important and if people cannot guard their health, efforts to enhance other aspects of the society are useless. In an highly interdependent world, health is closely liked with other fields especially economic and social development. In 2008, Lancet studied brain of two children. One was supplied adequate nutrition and another was neglected. He found out that the one who was neglected and was deeply malnourished had about 40 percent smaller brain than the one who had adequate nutrition. Also, the neurons and the synapses of the brain didn't form sufficiently. He concluded that the earning potential of these children is cut in half in their lifetime due to the stunting that happened in early years. It will eventually affect economical and social status. Also, adults who are suffering from infectious diseases lose income while they are sick and out of works, which is a major contributor to keeping their families in an endless cycle of poverty.
   If really concerned about their citizens and global peace, future global leaders should try their best to promote global health. Though it might look strange and unrealistic to developed countries' citizens, it is true that people in other parts of the globe are still dying because they don't have a dollar, because they even cannot have a meal a day. Solving this problem and promoting health conditions of everyone is important, not only for developing nations which are directly influenced, but also for developed nations since the world is interdepenednt. If we let citizens of developing countries die and just think about temporary benefits of our own countries, they will keep dying due to curable diseases and it will also influence the health our countries, and other aspects such as economy. Future global leaders should know what will benefit their country in a long term and what will contribute to global well-being. If they have these abilities, they must focus on promoting global health as I insisted.

Week 10 Objectives - Conclusion

If really concerned about their citizens and global peace, future global leaders should try their best to promote global health. Though it might look strange and unrealistic to developed countries' citizens, it is true that people in other parts of the globe are still dying because they don't have a dollar, because they even cannot have a meal a day. Solving this problem and promoting health conditions of everyone is important, not only for developing nations which are directly influenced, but also for developed nations since the world is interdepenednt. If we let citizens of developing countries die and just think about temporary benefits of our own countries, they will keep dying due to curable diseases and it will also influence the health our countries, and other aspects such as economy.  Future global leaders should know what will benefit their country in a long term and what will contribute to global well-being. If they have these abilities, they must focus on promoting global health as I insisited.

Week 9 Objectives - Refutation and Concession

1. What is my thesis?
Future global leaders should take global health as their primary goal.

2. What is the opposite position?
Other things are more important than global health.


3. What arguments can I anticipate?
Solving other problems(such as economical recession) are much more urgent. Promoting global health is not that important.


4. How will I counter those arguments?
Promoting global health is important. It influences other parts.

My Refutation and Concession

  Some economists might insist that promoting global health is not important. They can insist that solving other urgent issues such as economic recession is much more important and essential for enhancing the quality of life. That's partly true. It is also important to solve other urgent issues. However, promoting global health is much more important and if people cannot guard their health, efforts to enhance other aspects of the society are useless. In an highly interdependent world, health is closely liked with other fields especially economic and social development. In 2008, Lancet studied brain of two children. One was supplied adequate nutrition and another was neglected. He found out that the one who was neglected and was deeply malnourished had about 40 percent smaller brain than the one who had adequate nutrition. Also, the neurons and the synapses of the brain didn't form sufficiently. He concluded that the earning potential of these children is cut in half in their lifetime due to the stunting that happened in early years. It will eventually affect economical and social status. Also, adults who are suffering from infectious diseases lose income while they are sick and out of works, which is a major contributor to keeping their families in an endless cycle of poverty.

Research #4

Source:Josette Sheeran - Ending Hunger now
http://www.ted.com/talks/josette_sheeran_ending_hunger_now/transcript?language=en#t-313000

My Topic:
Health problems of developing nations influence many other fields.

What I hope to learn from this source:
I want to refute some opponents' points that other problems are more important than global health issues.


Notes:
  1. The one who was neglected and was deeply malnourished had about 40 percent smaller brain than the one who had adequate nutrition.
  2. The neurons and the synapses of the brain didn't form sufficiently in the brain of a child who suffered malnutrition
  3. The earning potential of neglected children is cut in half in their lifetime due to the stunting that happened in early years

Final Thoughts:
This source showed me that health influences many other fields, thus, sloving health problems and promoting global health is important

Week 8 Objectives - The Confirmation


1. What is my thesis?
Future global leaders should take global health as their primary concern

 2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 

I am using examples and statistics from reliable orgainzations.
3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments are mostly based on evidence and statistics, thus, it is logical.



My Confirmation

   Then, why should global health should be primary concern for future global leaders? Why should people in the United States of America, the United Kingdom, and Australia should also concern about global health that might seem unrelated to them although they will be the ones who should pay the most for it? Actually, for a number of critical reasons, the global health should be concerns for not only developing nations, but developed nations.
  
  First, everyone deserves an equal opportunity for health. Many member states of the United Nations signed on to Article 25, which says:

Everyone has the right to a standard of living adequate for the health and well-being of himself and of his family, including food, clothing, housing and medical care and necessary social services, and the right to security in the event of unemployment, sickness, disability, widowhood, old age or other lack of livelihood in circumstances beyond his control.

   The world community has so many tools to make people healthy today, allowing them to contribute to their families and their communities. However, many children in poor countries get sick and die needlessly from malnutrition of from diseases that are curable and preventable. Many adults in developing countries are dying due to their lack of access to medicines that are available to people in rich countries. Is this just? Is it right to accept such deaths without steps to prevent them?
 
   Second, diseases do not respect boundaries. In other words, developing countries also can get diseases of developed countries. This is especially true for epidemic disease. Human immunodeficiency virus(HIV), has spread worldwide. A person with tuberculosis can infect 15 people a year. Actually, in the United States as a whole, 39% of all tuberculosis cases are in foreign-born individuals; in California, this proportion is 69%. Clearly, the health of each of us is increasingly depending on the health of others.


http://www.macalester.edu/news/2013/10/why-global-health-matters/
Why Study Global Health? - Global Health Institute

Week 7 Objectives - The Narration Changed

CHANGED BECAUSE FORMER ONE WAS DIGRESSING FROM THE MAIN TOPIC

My persuasive argument thesis is: Global leaders should take global health as their primary concern.

1. What do people already know about my topic?

Everyone knows that there are gaps of health conditions between the rich and the poor, and poor countries' health problems are usually more serious.

 
2. What research has already been done about my topic?
 
http://www.twnside.org.sg/title/twr131a.htm/
http://www.wfp.org/hunger/stats
- Health problems in developing countries. Show that health problems that are rare in developed countries are prevalent in developing countries/ Cause - too expensive medicine
 
-Developed countries' new health problem. Caused by a dietary imbalance

 

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)
 
Health is related to many other fields, thus, enchancing global health, will also lead to enhancment in many other areas too. If people ignore me, many people will keep dying due to health problems.


My Narration


As everyone knows, health problems are quite different between developing countries and developed countries. Also, health problems in developing countries are usually more serious than those in developed coutries.
 
Developing countries, which are nations with lower standard of living, are still suffering from the health problems that already disappeared in developed countries. About 14 million people die each year due to infectious diseases, and many of them are preventable or treatable, such as acute respiratory infections, diarrhoeal diseases, malaria and tuberculosis, taking 45% of deaths in Africa and South-East Asia. This health crisis is caused by several factors such as poverty, lack of access to health services, water and inaccessibility of effective medicine. For example, more than 95% of HIV infections are in developing countries, two-thirds of them in sub-Saharan Africa, where over 28 million people are living with HIV. AIDS medicine is estimated at US$10,000-15,000 (the Guardian, 12 February 2001). This price level puts such treatment out of reach of most people in the developing world. Malnutrition is also serious in developing countries while it almost disappeared in developed countries. The vast majority of the world's hungry people live in developing countries, where 13.5 percent of the population is undernourished. Asia is the continent with the most hungry people which takes two thirds of the total. Sub-Saharan Africa is the region with the highest percentage of hunger. One person in four there is undernourished. When malnutrition comes to children, the problem becomes more severe since it can directly lead to death. One out of six children, which is roughly 100million, in developing countries is underweight. While One in four of the world's children are stunted, the proportion can rise to one in three in developing countries.
 
Many diseases are emerging in developed countries too. Ironically, as developing countries continue their efforts to reduce hunger, some in those countries are also facing the opposing problem of obesity. As Prakash Shetty, the chief of FAO's(Food and Agricultural Organization of United Nations) Nutrition Planning said "We believe obesity is a significant problem that needs to be dealt with, along with the problem of the underfed", Obesity is also a serious problem in developing countries along with malnutrition and other developing countries' health diseases. This result is due to dietary imbalance. While obesity rate in developed countries is turning a cornor (The rate of obesity in preschool-age children dropped about 40% over the past decade, according to data from a comprehensive federal survey published Tuesday in the Journal of the American Medical Association), obesity rate is drastically increasing in developing countries. For example, in China, the number of overweight people jumped from less than 10 percent to 15 percent in just three years. Brazil and Colombia, the figure hovers around 40 percent, a level comparable to a number of European countries. Sub-Saharan Africa, where has the highest number of hungry people, is showing an increase in obesity, especially among urban women.
 
Solving developing countries' health problems and promoting global health are urgent issues and many efforts are needed. If not, health problems will keep bothering all disadvantaged people.

Week 7 Objectives - The Narration

 My persuasive argument thesis is: Global leaders should take global health as their primary concern.

1. What do people already know about my topic?

Everyone knows that there are gaps of health conditions between the rich and the poor. They also know that people have different health problems according to their health conditions, and the situation that while one is dying due to excessive supply of food, another is dying due to malnutrition.
2. What research has already been done about my topic?
 
http://www.twnside.org.sg/title/twr131a.htm/
http://www.wfp.org/hunger/stats
- Health problems in developing countries. Show that health problems that are rare in developed countries are prevalent in developing countries/ Cause - too expensive medicine
 
- Health problems in developed countries. / Different health problem from developing countries. Too much v.s. too little
 
-Developed countries' health problem in developing countries/ Showing that there are gaps of health problems between the rich and the poor within a country


 

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)
 
Health is related to many other fields, thus, enchancing global health, will also lead to enhancment in many other areas too. If people ignore me, many people will keep dying due to health problems.


 

My Narration


   As everyone knows, health problems are quite different between developing countries and developed countries, so in this esseay, I will divide countries into developing countries and developed countries and talk about their different health problems.
 
  Developing countries, which are nations with lower standard of living, are still suffering from the health problems that already disappeared in developed countries. About 14 million people die each year due to infectious diseases, and many of them are preventable or treatable, such as acute respiratory infections, diarrhoeal diseases, malaria and tuberculosis, taking 45% of deaths in Africa and South-East Asia. This health crisis is caused by several factors such as poverty, lack of access to health services, water and inaccessibility of effective medicine. For example, more than 95% of HIV infections are in developing countries, two-thirds of them in sub-Saharan Africa, where over 28 million people are living with HIV. AIDS medicine is estimated at US$10,000-15,000 (the Guardian, 12 February 2001). This price level puts such treatment out of reach of most people in the developing world. Malnutrition is also serious in developing countries while it almost disappeared in developed countries. The vast majority of the world's hungry people live in developing countries, where 13.5 percent of the population is undernourished. Asia is the continent with the most hungry people which takes two thirds of the total. Sub-Saharan Africa is the region with the highest percentage of hunger. One person in four there is undernourished. When malnutrition comes to children, the problem becomes more severe since it can directly lead to death. One out of six children, which is roughly 100million, in developing countries is underweight. While One in four of the world's children are stunted, the proportion can rise to one in three in developing countries.
  
  The 31 percent of population older than 15 in United States of America are obese. Following United States of America, Mexico(24%), United Kingdom(23%), Slovak Republic(22%), Austrailia(22%) are also showing high percentage of obesity. Obesity-related conditions include heart disease, stroke, type 2 diabetes and certain types of cancer, some of the leading causes of preventable death. They spend much money on curing obesity, the estimated annual medical cost of obesity in the United States was $147 billion in 2008. To sum up, while one in developing county is dying due to malnutrition and poverty, another in developed country is dying due to excessive nutrition and wealth.
 
   Ironically, as developing countries continue their efforts to reduce hunger, some in those countries are also facing the opposing problem of obesity. As Prakash Shetty, the chief of FAO's(Food and Agricultural Organization of United Nations) Nutrition Planning said "We believe obesity is a significant problem that needs to be dealt with, along with the problem of the underfed", Obesity is also a serious problem in developing countries along with malnutrition and other developing countries' health diseases. For example, in China, the number of overweight people jumped from less than 10 percent to 15 percent in just three years. Brazil and Colombia, the figure hovers around 40 percent, a level comparable to a number of European countries. Sub-Saharan Africa, where has the highest number of hungry people, is showing an increase in obesity, especially among urban women. This Statistics show that even within a country, the economy gap between the rich and the poor is serious and this directly leads to different health problems. Anyway, either the rich or the poor, health problem is serious and efforts are needed to solve these problems. If not, health problems will keep bothering people all over the world.
 

 

Research #3

Source:Food and agricultural organization of United Nations
http://www.fao.org/focus/e/obesity/obes1.htm

My Topic:
Obesity in developing countries


 What I hope to learn from this source:
 New diseases are emerging in developing countries 


Notes:
  1. As developing countries continue their efforts to reduce hunger, some are also facing the opposing problem of obesity.
  2. "We believe obesity is a significant problem that needs to be dealt with, along with the problem of the underfed," (Prakash Shetty, Chief of FAO's Nutrition Planning, Assessment and Evaluation service)
  3. Even in countries where hunger exists/ Obesity is a serious problem
  4. China, the number of overweight people jumped from less than 10 percent to 15 percent in just three years.
  5.  Brazil and Colombia, the figure hovers around 40 percent -- a level comparable to a number of European countries.
  6. Sub-Saharan Africa, where most of the world's hungry live, is seeing an increase in obesity, especially among urban women

 

Final Thoughts:
This source shows that even in developing countries, where there still are many people suffering hunger, obesity is a serious problem. It is due to dietary imbalance, and this problem should be solved too to promote global health.

Research #2

Source:Third World Network
http://www.twnside.org.sg/title/twr131a.htm

World Food Programme
http://www.wfp.org/hunger/stats


My Topic:
Developing country's health problem


 What I hope to learn from this source:
I want to find facts that can show that developing countries' health problems are different from developed countries' problems, and think about solutions for developing-countries' health problems.


Notes:
  1. ABOUT 14 million people die each year from infectious diseases, many of which are preventable or treatable, such as acute respiratory infections, diarrhoeal diseases, malaria and tuberculosis.(45% of deaths in Africa and South-East Asia)
  2. This health crisis is caused by several interlinked factors - poverty, and lack of access to health services, water and sanitation being some of them./ However, a vital factor is the supply of effective and affordable medicines and people’s access to such medicines and treatments.
  3.  In industrialised countries, AIDS deaths have been dramatically reduced partly because of the availability of life-saving medicines.
  4. AIDS medicine is estimated at US$10,000-15,000 (the Guardian, 12 February 2001).  This price level puts such treatment out of reach of most people in the developing world, where 95% of the people with HIV are from.
  5. Companies owning or controlling patents on the medicines have been able to block competition from other firms and other products. Prices of patented medicines are very much linked to the monopolies enjoyed by pharmaceutical companies, protected and maintained by patent rights.
  6. The vast majority of the world's hungry people live in developing countries, where 13.5 percent of the population is undernourished.
  7. Asia is the continent with the most hungry people - two thirds of the total. 
  8.  Sub-Saharan Africa is the region with the highest prevalence (percentage of population) of hunger. One person in four there is undernourished.
  9. One out of six children -- roughly 100 million -- in developing countries is underweight. One in four of the world's children are stunted. In developing countries the proportion can rise to one in three.
 
 
Final Thoughts:
This informations shows that developing countries' mortality can decrease significantly if we provide efficient medicine to them. I will think about solutions that countries and organizations can make to solve this problem.

2014년 10월 25일 토요일

Week 6 Objectives - The Introduction

As there are many proverbs related to health, such as 'The greatest wealth is Health.', health plays one of the most important parts in our lives, and keeping healthy lives has been a goal of life for many people. However, due to environmental factors and economical factors, many people cannot guard their own health. Reflecting this situation, the concept 'Global Health' emerged. Global Health, which means research and practice that places a priority on improving health and achieving equity in health for all people worldwide, has been the center talking point among nations and global organizations. However, as global health issues are spreaded extensively and need active cooperation of all nations, it is hard to solve. To solve this issue and guarantee health of all citizens, global leaders should take global health as their primary concern.

1. Attention grabber
I attracted the audience by describing a familiar proverb, and then linked it into the current situation that many people cannnot guard their health.


2. Explains the topic
I mentioned the background of the emergence of the term 'global health', and definition of it.

3. My thesis
It was clear and short. I changed  it a little bit according to the context. 'Global leaders should take global health as their primary concern.

Research #1

Source:World Health Organization
 
My Topic:
What is Global Health?(Basic information about the concept)
 What I hope to learn from this source:
 I want to find baisc informations about globla health. What is the global health?
Notes:
  1. Global health is the area of study, research and practice that places a priority on improving health and achieving equity in health for all people worldwide
  2. The goal is worldwide health development, reduction of disparties,and the  protection against global threats that disregard national borders. 
  3. The predominant agency associated with global health is the World Health Organization(WHO). Also include UNICEF, World Food Programme, and the World Bank.
  4.  The United Nations has also played a part with declaration the Millennium Development goals

 
Final Thoughts:
The information is from reliable website(WHO official website). I need to find more informations related to my thesis that 'Global Health should be primary concern for future global leaders' rather than just basic information about the concept
 

Classical Argument Outline

1. The introduction, which warms up the audience, establishes goodwill and rapport with the readers, and announces the general theme or thesis of the argument.
I will start by mentioning how health is important. I will get readers attention using proverbs related to the health and emphasize how important health is. I will briefly mention some people cannot secure their health and introduce the concept 'Global Health'  Then I will end with my thesis that 'Global health should be the primary concern for future global leaders.'

2. The narration, which summarizes relevant background material, provides any information the audience needs to know about the environment and circumstances that produce the argument, and set up the stakes-what’s at risk in this question. In academic writing, this often takes the form of a literature review.
In this section I will summarize the research I've done. I will talk about health inequality between rich and poor nations and between rich and poor citizens inside the country(the gap between the rich and the poor). I will talk about different health problems, for example obesity and malnutrition, and reasons for this.

3. The confirmation, which lays out in a logical order (usually strongest to weakest or most obvious to most subtle) the claims that support the thesis, providing evidence for each claim.
I will talk about what efforts should future global leaders make to slove the global health problem. I will divide into three parts, the efforts that developing countries should make, that developed countries should make, and international organizations should make.

4. The refutation and concession, which looks at opposing viewpoints to the writer’s claims, anticipating objections from the audience, and allowing as much of the opposing viewpoints as possible without weakening the thesis.
There are already many efforts to enhance global health. Yes that's right. There are many efforts to enhance common health among non-govenrmental organizations and international organizations such as UN. However, without countries' active participation and cooperation, their goals cannot be achieved and it is the government that can give professional help.


5. The summation, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument, and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.
I will close with a summary of my previous points, then emphasize that health is related to so many fields that enhancing common helath is important than any other things. I will end with a reaffirmation of my original thesis. 

2014년 10월 23일 목요일

Articulation

1) My argument Write your argument in one sentence. Then, spend some time explaining it. 
GLOBAL HEALTH SHOULD BE THE PRIMARY CONCERN FOR FUTURE GLOBAL LEADERS

. Health Inequality problem is serious in all over the world. While some others would argue that economical development and other problems are more urgent, I believe that solving health inequality problem and enchacing health condition of disadvantaged people is more important and essential.
 

2) How I found my argument Explain how your research helped you find your argument. Or, in other words, how did your research evolve into your argument? Start with your research question.

 My former research helped me find our how serious health inequality problem is, and how important global health is. Actually, I was interested in issues about human rights and disadvantaged people, but I didn't know that health inequality between rich and poor nations are that much serious. It motivated me to research about global health and awaken others the seriousness of the problem.



3) New research questions What do you still need to know? What is your research plan?
  •  How serious the health inequality problem is? 
  •  How does health inequality affect other fields(economy, politics...)
  • What efforts should global leaders make for global heath
I will find informations on professional related sites such as WHO, and find some statistics that can support my point. Also, I will find counter arguments and refute their points


4) Connections to the Harvard Sampler How is your argument connected to the Harvard Sampler? ANY CONNECTION IS VALID. Please focus on choosing a good argument first, then think about how it is related to the Harvard Sampler. I will help you think of the connection if necessary.

 My topic is related to 'Medical Detectives'. The Harvard Sampler talks about various helath problems that is emerging among developing nations, due to 'execssive nutrition' such as diabetes caused by french fries. However, there are still many people who are suffering poverty and lack of food, thus, researching about global health is essential.

Research Proposal

What is my current topic?
Health Inequailty, Global health

What are my guiding questions?
Does Global health issue urgent?

Why? How serious the problem is? 

What are my current thoughts?
Health Inequality among nations and even within a country is serious, thus, global health should be the primary concern for all nations.

What is the opposition?
Economic devleopment is more important

2014년 10월 22일 수요일

Brainstorming

Health Inequality


Increasing evidence from scientists the world over indicates that many health outcomes can be linked to the level of economic inequality within a given population. 

Greater economic inequality appears to lead to worse health outcomes. 
Epidemiologists (the scientists who study the health of populations)don’t just mean poverty. Poor health and poverty are related.
But high levels of inequality negatively affect the health of even the affluent, mainly because, researchers contend, inequality reduces social cohesion, which leads to more stress, fear, and insecurity for everyone.

The ratio between the average incomes of the top and bottom tenths of families in these nations. Higher number indicates a country with greater income inequality
(Source : Organisation for Economic Co-operation and Development)

Infant Mortality
(Source : Organisation for Economic Co-operation and Development)

Correlation between them
Infant mortality is higher in more unequal countries
(Source : Inequality Trust)