I will start by mentioning how health is important. I will get readers attention using proverbs related to the health and emphasize how important health is. I will briefly mention some people cannot secure their health and introduce the concept 'Global Health' Then I will end with my thesis that 'Global health should be the primary concern for future global leaders.'
2. The narration, which summarizes relevant background material, provides any information the audience needs to know about the environment and circumstances that produce the argument, and set up the stakes-what’s at risk in this question. In academic writing, this often takes the form of a literature review.
In this section I will summarize the research I've done. I will talk about health inequality between rich and poor nations and between rich and poor citizens inside the country(the gap between the rich and the poor). I will talk about different health problems, for example obesity and malnutrition, and reasons for this.
3. The confirmation, which lays out in a logical order (usually strongest to weakest or most obvious to most subtle) the claims that support the thesis, providing evidence for each claim.
I will talk about what efforts should future global leaders make to slove the global health problem. I will divide into three parts, the efforts that developing countries should make, that developed countries should make, and international organizations should make.
4. The refutation and concession, which looks at opposing viewpoints to the writer’s claims, anticipating objections from the audience, and allowing as much of the opposing viewpoints as possible without weakening the thesis.
There are already many efforts to enhance global health. Yes that's right. There are many efforts to enhance common health among non-govenrmental organizations and international organizations such as UN. However, without countries' active participation and cooperation, their goals cannot be achieved and it is the government that can give professional help.
5. The summation, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument, and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.
I will close with a summary of my previous points, then emphasize that health is related to so many fields that enhancing common helath is important than any other things. I will end with a reaffirmation of my original thesis.
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